tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938843948532947122.post1768034969886855177..comments2023-10-14T18:57:42.910-07:00Comments on Rose Corcoran: Satellite Song: Kurow no MonogatariRose Corcoranhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07932774039761498193noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938843948532947122.post-59198918731961771492015-10-15T20:13:30.109-07:002015-10-15T20:13:30.109-07:00Thank you :) I tried to combine the character'...Thank you :) I tried to combine the character's story with the idea of the moon being formed when Theia hit earth, and the idea that the moon used to be a part of earth. The moon does a lot for us, such a giving us regular tides, protecting us from some meteors, and keeping our nice 23 degree tilt (or so it all said on some science program I saw one time!). So really, the earth has a lot to Rose Corcoranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07932774039761498193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938843948532947122.post-21824261418824380022015-10-15T10:38:12.343-07:002015-10-15T10:38:12.343-07:00I think it's awesome, even if I'm not that...I think it's awesome, even if I'm not that familiar with your silly video game. I think it stands alone as a moon poem (especially the first two stanzas).<br />Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14507318698151812731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938843948532947122.post-80787701353097779482015-07-29T09:16:06.544-07:002015-07-29T09:16:06.544-07:00Thank you! Obsessing over fictional characters giv...Thank you! Obsessing over fictional characters gives me increased poetic ability :)Rose Corcoranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07932774039761498193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2938843948532947122.post-19966976177453787522015-07-28T19:21:02.015-07:002015-07-28T19:21:02.015-07:00Wow! The use of internal rhyme and imagery is amaz...Wow! The use of internal rhyme and imagery is amazing in this rhyme!Kathy Corcorannoreply@blogger.com